India

I want to go to India in the holidays . I want to go with my family . I want to see the hotel . I will see stachuse  . Then I want to eat some rice .  Next I want to swim in the water with my family . I feel nervaus because I havent done it before .

 By sean

Swiming

                                                                              Swimming                                                                             In the holidays I want to go to India for the Commonwealth games. I  want to go with my swimming team .first I am going on a plane too india for the commonwealth games with heaps of cool staff. then I want to make a nice swimming team for us too have a lovely race to swim. at last we had a race with a difrent Indian team and I won. I felt happy because I had a gold trophy             and I won.

by Anijah                                                    

        

                                                              shooting                                                                                          

In the holidays I want to go to India with my English shooting team and with my lovely  famliy .

First I want to go on the big plan to go India. Then I want to go to my big hotel in India. Then

I want to eat some yumy food  like rice and poore. Then I want to go shooting with my armea

gon on the brown soft sand mountains with my team maths.I will shoot on the rainbow target 

and I will get 20 chances to do it.I feel happy because that is the first time I did it.

By Renesh in 

room 8.

Samoa

In the summer we want to go to the sea in Samoa. First I will see the warm sea. Then the coconut tree was yummy and a turtle was so heavy I can't lift it over my head. I was happy because it was fun.

By Jade

Samoa

In Summer I want to go to hot Samoa with my family. First I want to go to the ocean. Then I want to go to the blow holes. Next I want to go home. I like Samoa because it is hot. I feel excited because I get to swim in the ocean.

By Elisha

I like Samoa because it is fun and I can throw the coconuts in the holes when I go to see the blow holes.

By Jordan

I went to Samoa in the holidays.

By Serena

I like Samoa because I can swim. I see a coconut up in the tree.

By Olive

SAMOA ISLAND

In summer I want to go to samoa with my family.

In samoa I could swim in the warm sea water. Then I want to climb the long yumy coconut trees. After I want to make sand castes on the hot sand. I feel happy becaues theres lots of coconuts.

By Renesh

My Holidays in samoa

In summer I want to go to Samoa in the holidays and I will go with my family.

First I want to see the blow holes the blow hole it is a bit like a water volcano. The blow holes blow water out of the holes. Then I will make friends over there and play with them and help them. After I will drink coconut with the straw. I feel happy because it s a lovely place.

By Srishti.

I want to go to Samoa. I can see the wild dogs by the coconut tree.

By Sio

My holiday to samoa

In the summer I want to go to Samoa with my family. I will see a water volcano blow hole . Then  I  will climb a coconut tree and I will get the  coconut. Next I will swim at the warm beach. I feel  happy in samoa because it is  nice . 

By George   

               

             

I went to Samoa in the holidays.

By Serena

In Samoa I am with my Mum at the beach.

By Ricarda.

In Samoa I am with my Mum. I like to play in the water. 

By Tinovao

                                                           My holiday to samoa 

In the summer I want to go to samoa with my family. First I want too go to the waterfall because

I want a swim. Then I want to go to the blow Holes. I'll go to the turtle place so I can lift the turtles up. I feel happy because I like samoa.

By sambo

I went to samoa in the holidays with my Dad. I can see a coconuts on the trees. I can see a wild dog.

By Elisaia

samoa Island

                                                                The Holidays                                                                                         In the holidays I want to go Savai'i in samoa with my Auntie,  Uncle , family And cousins. I made some new friends. First I went to my grandmas house.  Then I went to Savai to go to see the scary turtles.  After we to the beach for a swim with my whole lovely family. Finally we went to the waterfall. I went down the waterfall. I felt happy happy because it was fun. 

                                                                       By Anijah                  

Week 6 Writing

We wrote stories about a trip we would like to take to Samoa. We used the photos from the internet and from Miss Fenton's holiday to get our ideas of things we may see.

Goals:

To sequence our ideas.

To add detail and description to each idea.

Grab your coffee and biscuit and have a read of our clever stories.

Blackpool

Sunshine in england 

I went to  the beach in blackpool when it was summer With my Family. I can smell some fish I can see a white bird  I was excited And happy. It was fun Over there.

By Sogani

  

                                                     

Blackpool

In the summer I want to go to blackpool with my famiy. And when I go I will smell salty water and hear people screaming on the slides and I see water. And I feel special because it feels liek my birthday.

By George

Blackpool

Trip to blackpool

In the winter I want to go to blackpool with my parents.

I can smell salty water. I can hear birds sing, I can hear salty water crashing through the rocks.

I feel exited. I see the big bouncy castles. It is a tall rollercoaster. There is a blue sky . It is a fun place and it is windy at blackpool.

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Blackpool

I went to the black pool, it's like a beach and when it was summer I was with my family. I can smell salty  water I hear waves and talking and we see people that grow.  It is fun and exciting. 

By Nate

London

 I will go to Londn in the summer. And I will go with my family.

I smell the salty water and foods. I  can hear salty water crashing into big rocks and  I hear people screaming .

I see people going on the rollercoaster . I feel excited because its a fun place.

By Srishti 

Blackpool

When its summer I want to go to the Blackpool with my family. 

I can smell the salty water and yummy food. And I can hear people screaming on the big roller coster and i can hear big birds and small birds . I can  see people and birds and big trees and houses . When i touch the big  tree it feels hard and when I touch the big houses it feels hard and when my feet is touching the long ground it feels very hard .

By Sean

Blackpool

                                                                     BLACKPOOL

When it is summer I want to go to Blackpool with my family . I see short kids bouncing on the little bouncy castle. I smell yummy food also I hear people screaming  on the rolly coaster and I hear big people talking. I feel excited because it is fun on the awesome rolly coaster.

By Sakada (Sambo)

London

When it is summer I want to go to London  to see the  the queen with my  family. 

I can smell yummy food from the shops like fish and chips. I can hear the loud Big Ben  going ding dong  and hear people yelling there kids name.

I see the beautiful queen and her nice, helpful guards at her big castle and I saw the eye. I could feel the hard ground when I put my foot on it.                                                                                             By Anijah                                                                                         

Blackpool

In spring I want to go to BackPool with my family.

I could smell delicious food and salty blue water by the sea shore. I could hear screaming, shouting and people talking. In the brown sand I could see some big brown people relaxing on the red picknick blanket some people talking and some people swimming in the deep blue water. I feel very excited when I go on the twirly roller coaster.

By Renesh

Week 5 Writing!!!

This week we have been looking at places in England. We learnt about London and all the wonderful things you can do here. We also learnt about Blackpool a sunny sea side in England.

Goals: The children had to tell me when, where and who they would go with. Then they had to tell me about what they would smell, hear, see and feel about being in this special place. They were concentrating on adjectives, capital letters and full stops.

Didn't we do well!!!

ICT - Kidspiration Shark

We are learning about animals and during ICT we have been using Kidspiration to display our knowledge of animals.

Today we looked at a shark we talked about what it eats, where it lives and body parts. We then put our ideas down on Kidspiration.

Here is what we have achieved so far...

Holidays

Holidays

The children have been learning how to plan their stories and write these plans into a fun, exciting story to read. Some groups were looking at adding adjectives, some groups were looking at sequencing their stories and some groups were looking at their punctuation. Have a read and leave us a comment about what you think.  :-) 

The Sky Tower

Monday 15th March 2010

Last Wednesday we went to the sky Tower and Mission Bay with room 8 and room 16. Before at the sky tower we watched a movie and went to the top in the scary elivator and we had morning tea up at the top then we came back down. We went to have lunch and played on the park. We had so much fun at the sky tower.

By Anijah

Teachers comment: Wow Anijah what a fantastic story. I loved reading it!!

The Sky Tower

Monday 15th March 2010

Last Wednesday we went on the sky tower trip. We went on the scary lift and then we watched all of the stuff on the movie. After we went to the beach and I played in the park. I felt happy.

By Srishti

My sky Tower Trip

Thursday 18 March 2010

I went to the sky tower on Wednesday.

By Jordan.

Teacher's comment: Jordan what a fantastic story written with a little support!

The Sky Tower

On Wednesday we went to the sky tower and I had fun.

By Devon

Sky Tower Trip

On Wednesday we went to the sky tower and I went to Mission Bay and I went back to Randwick Park School.

By Ngakau