Blackpool

In spring I want to go to BackPool with my family.

I could smell delicious food and salty blue water by the sea shore. I could hear screaming, shouting and people talking. In the brown sand I could see some big brown people relaxing on the red picknick blanket some people talking and some people swimming in the deep blue water. I feel very excited when I go on the twirly roller coaster.

By Renesh

Week 5 Writing!!!

This week we have been looking at places in England. We learnt about London and all the wonderful things you can do here. We also learnt about Blackpool a sunny sea side in England.

Goals: The children had to tell me when, where and who they would go with. Then they had to tell me about what they would smell, hear, see and feel about being in this special place. They were concentrating on adjectives, capital letters and full stops.

Didn't we do well!!!