In the summer we want to go to the sea in Samoa. First I will see the warm sea. Then the coconut tree was yummy and a turtle was so heavy I can't lift it over my head. I was happy because it was fun.
By Jade
Friday, August 27, 2010
SAMOA ISLAND
In summer I want to go to samoa with my family.
In samoa I could swim in the warm sea water. Then I want to climb the long yumy coconut trees. After I want to make sand castes on the hot sand. I feel happy becaues theres lots of coconuts.
By Renesh
My Holidays in samoa
In summer I want to go to Samoa in the holidays and I will go with my family.
First I want to see the blow holes the blow hole it is a bit like a water volcano. The blow holes blow water out of the holes. Then I will make friends over there and play with them and help them. After I will drink coconut with the straw. I feel happy because it s a lovely place.
By Srishti.
My holiday to samoa
In the summer I want to go to Samoa with my family. I will see a water volcano blow hole . Then I will climb a coconut tree and I will get the coconut. Next I will swim at the warm beach. I feel happy in samoa because it is nice .
By George
samoa Island
The Holidays In the holidays I want to go Savai'i in samoa with my Auntie, Uncle , family And cousins. I made some new friends. First I went to my grandmas house. Then I went to Savai to go to see the scary turtles. After we to the beach for a swim with my whole lovely family. Finally we went to the waterfall. I went down the waterfall. I felt happy happy because it was fun.
By Anijah
Wednesday, August 25, 2010
Week 6 Writing
We wrote stories about a trip we would like to take to Samoa. We used the photos from the internet and from Miss Fenton's holiday to get our ideas of things we may see. Goals:
To sequence our ideas.
To add detail and description to each idea.
Grab your coffee and biscuit and have a read of our clever stories.
Friday, August 20, 2010
Blackpool
Sunshine in england
I went to the beach in blackpool when it was summer With my Family. I can smell some fish I can see a white bird I was excited And happy. It was fun Over there.
By Sogani
Blackpool
In the summer I want to go to blackpool with my famiy. And when I go I will smell salty water and hear people screaming on the slides and I see water. And I feel special because it feels liek my birthday.
By George
Blackpool
Trip to blackpool
In the winter I want to go to blackpool with my parents.
I can smell salty water. I can hear birds sing, I can hear salty water crashing through the rocks.
I feel exited. I see the big bouncy castles. It is a tall rollercoaster. There is a blue sky . It is a fun place and it is windy at blackpool.
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Blackpool
I went to the black pool, it's like a beach and when it was summer I was with my family. I can smell salty water I hear waves and talking and we see people that grow. It is fun and exciting.
By Nate
London
I will go to Londn in the summer. And I will go with my family.
I smell the salty water and foods. I can hear salty water crashing into big rocks and I hear people screaming .
I see people going on the rollercoaster . I feel excited because its a fun place.
By Srishti
Thursday, August 19, 2010
Blackpool
When its summer I want to go to the Blackpool with my family.
I can smell the salty water and yummy food. And I can hear people screaming on the big roller coster and i can hear big birds and small birds . I can see people and birds and big trees and houses . When i touch the big tree it feels hard and when I touch the big houses it feels hard and when my feet is touching the long ground it feels very hard .
By Sean
Blackpool
BLACKPOOL
When it is summer I want to go to Blackpool with my family . I see short kids bouncing on the little bouncy castle. I smell yummy food also I hear people screaming on the rolly coaster and I hear big people talking. I feel excited because it is fun on the awesome rolly coaster.
By Sakada (Sambo)
London
When it is summer I want to go to London to see the the queen with my family.
I can smell yummy food from the shops like fish and chips. I can hear the loud Big Ben going ding dong and hear people yelling there kids name.
I see the beautiful queen and her nice, helpful guards at her big castle and I saw the eye. I could feel the hard ground when I put my foot on it. By Anijah
Blackpool
In spring I want to go to BackPool with my family. I could smell delicious food and salty blue water by the sea shore. I could hear screaming, shouting and people talking. In the brown sand I could see some big brown people relaxing on the red picknick blanket some people talking and some people swimming in the deep blue water. I feel very excited when I go on the twirly roller coaster.
By Renesh
Week 5 Writing!!!
This week we have been looking at places in England. We learnt about London and all the wonderful things you can do here. We also learnt about Blackpool a sunny sea side in England.
Goals: The children had to tell me when, where and who they would go with. Then they had to tell me about what they would smell, hear, see and feel about being in this special place. They were concentrating on adjectives, capital letters and full stops.
Didn't we do well!!!
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